OK, yes, I know, I’ve made three posts today and my hands are going to be hurting like hell this evening (yah… not looking forward to that) but, I wrote a new poem today, and I figured that I needed y’all’s opinion on it!“Seasons” Winter to start Chilling the heart frost falling from his fingers, like fast-flying darts. Spring comes soon after, bringing light and laughter, we wish her to linger- but that makes her pass faster. Summer’s next on the scene crowned with jewels, like a queen, with days long and bright her clothes, gold and green. Then autumn comes nigh- crimson leaves start to fly, cool winds and gold light and the seasons pass by!”
It is a bit of a departure from my usual, simple “A,A,B,B” rhyme scheme, as this one goes “A,A,B,A, C,C,B,C” but I like this style. The inspiration was yet another cold wind sweeping through the backyard today, and the fine gold light that sprinkles the world during this, my favorite time of year.
Love to all!